Director's Commentary My issues with continuity started in this strip with the first panel originally containing three pipes in the background as opposed to the established two, and continued by through to my script referring to the mentioned, but not-yet-seen nemesis, Redbar, as "Professor Redface". It's not that I'm not paying attention, it's just that my attention wanders. I'm not making this up as I go along, just getting distracted occassionally. I spend most of my time at work correcting other peoples mistakes and so when I get home, I sometimes neglect to notice my own. I actually quite like this page. I think it has a nice layout and a decent broken composition. I've recently been reading Scott McCloud's "Understanding Comics" which is a fantastic graphic novel (if that's even the right classification) but through his theories, I can not for the life of me work out where my panel to panel transitions fit in. Are they the Marvel-Kribry Action to Action style, or are they more of a Manga Moment to Moment style? I think one of my work colleagues summed it up nicely as "Down to Earth", which I take to mean "not great, but ok."